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Thursday, 27 September 2018

T3W10 Writing

This week I have been using capital letters and punctuation. I have made a book using google slides to write and illustrate my story. please have a look and leave 
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3 comments:

  1. Miss Walters28 September 2018 at 12:57

    Hi Hasan,

    Well done on a brilliant bright and exciting layout! I loved reading your story about the spider, it was really interesting. Next time try and make the text a little bigger so it's easier to read :) Tino pai!

    From Miss W

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  2. Anonymous17 October 2018 at 13:46

    Hi Hasan It is me Jonathon From rimu I like your story And think that it is very intresting.Did you think about how The characters in your story might feel you could write out how they feel.Next time could you make the present mode For each slide A bit more longer yours .
    sincerly Jonathon

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  3. Anonymous25 October 2018 at 09:36

    hasan i love david squiggel mert it is a very funny story maybe you can put more capital letters and full stops great job

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