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Friday, 19 October 2018

T4W1 2018 letter


This Week we wrote a letter what place we went to in the holidays I wrote a letter to Timaru Caroline Bay Pools. 
11 Te Weka St,
 Maori Hill,
Timaru 7910
Dear Caroline Bay Pools,       
My favorite part about your pools is the hydro slides. I like the hydro slides because one gets spooky and the other one gets very fast. The green slide is tiny but so fun because there's a bucket that gets filled up with water and the water splashes on your head.

I also like the two pink racing slides because there’s a big puddle at the end. What I don't like is that you have to be under eight to go on the boats it should thirteen or under. Also,
you should make the slides a bit longer. Perhaps you could make a new slide. The slides color should be purple and blue now that would be cool.

From Hasan
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous6 December 2018 at 11:30

    HI Hasan I like your letter but I think that you could make It better.How just put the writing in a nice net oder instead of it going out of the page.
    Yours sincerly Jonathon

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